Sunday, March 4, 2018

Mentor Analysis Task: The Book That I Haven’t Started Writing Yet by Annabelle Gurwitch

            I came across a mentor text in The New Yorker magazine that I would use in my classroom to support their writing. The mentor text is called The Book That I Haven’t Started Writing Yet Will Be The Best Book Ever, and it is written by Annabelle Gurwitch. This mentor text is fun and is relevant for every student. This article is relevant to every student because it allows the students choice and a chance to demonstrate their voice through writing. This mentor text is not specific to any particular topic and allows room for students to choose to write about themselves or about something fictional. The author has a specific voice and tone to the article, and this could be discussed with the class while reading it. My idea would be to have the students read this article, and then write their own piece about the book that they haven’t started yet.
            According to Marchetti and O’Dell a mentor text should have certain requirements, and the mentor text I have chosen is a great fit. As the book states, “Sentence study takes the pressure off students to produce a sustained piece of writing and instead invites them to do something more manageable: write a sentence using the craft they noticed a mentor using” (Marchetti, O’Dell, 2015, 89). As a class the sentence structures, craft moves, and vocabulary could be discussed together. The writer of the mentor text uses words such as “copious” and “uncompromising” and these words could be defined as a class (Gurwitch 2018). It would be important to also talk about why the author is using these words and the effect that this craft has in the writing. This mentor text uses challenging vocabulary as a way of demonstrating craft in the article. My students could use the vocabulary that we are working on in the classroom to create their own article in a similar craft that the mentor uses.
            This mentor text is short and allows for time during the class period to read, discuss, and write. The students would be able to easily identify craft moves, and they would be able to create their sentences based off of the mentor text. One example of this in the mentor text states, “The photo on the back flap of my unwritten book will be black and white. I will be gazing off into the distance with an insouciant smile” (Gurwitch 2018). The students would be able to recognize that they are describing their fictional book and author picture with adjectives. This mentor text allows for flexibility as well, and I could see myself using either the whole article or just excerpts like the one above.
            While this mentor text would take a moderate amount of scaffolding because it does include complex vocabulary it is a fun and engaging mentor text. I could see myself using this mentor text in my classroom as a quick write for students or as a lesson in writing workshop. As the book states, “What is key is to select mentor texts that are based on your student’s current hobbies and interests” (Marchetti, O’Dell, 2015, 25). This mentor text is a great fit for all students, because it allows them to fit it to their current interests. I look forward to using this mentor text in my own classroom and experiencing the benefits of mentor texts.

References
Gurwitch, Annabelle. “The Book That I Haven't Started Writing Yet Will Be the Best Book Ever.” The New Yorker, The New Yorker, 20 Feb. 2018

Marchetti, Allison, and Rebekah O'Dell. Writing with Mentors: How to Reach Every Writer in the Room Using Current, Engaging Mentor Texts. Heinemann, 2015.




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